A chapter

I have just written the second draft of a chapter in which I describe the physical form of a character called the Matriarch. I think that people will find it unrealistic, most notably the reaction of Nulfaga. That's fine. I wanted to give just a hint that Nulfaga is being manipulated through the entanglement. I was thinking of adding something about the Matriarchs breath but that makes it too obvious. I don't want to dumb down to you all. You're better than that.